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Having launched my career in venture capital, where my work centered on deal analysis and investor communications, I have sharpened my interests around one direction. Wealth management appeals to me for its breadth of discipline, the entrepreneurial upside it offers, and
the opportunity to grow alongside the families and individuals at the heart of the practice. XYZ's record of growing to over $16 billion in assets under management while maintaining a 98% client..